Wow, this is great! Love the structure, very unusual and the way the two strophes blend together is brilliant. Is this a known form? If not, you should name it! The sounds are nice too. As to the meaning, it is a bit obscure, but it sounds like some sort of creature at first.. though with the symbolism of the willow, I thought of a woman weeping. The 'swallow many branches' confused me a bit, but I liked it anyway, lol. I'm going to think on this a bit more. Thanks for posting it!

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Hey, thanks for reading! Yes, the structure is unknown. I made this up, but I highly doubt it will be known, even though it is quite difficult to write by. You were almost correct in your interpretation. Yes, the poem refers to a person, more particularly a woman, but it's really not specific.

The image of a woman weeping beneath the willow is pretty good interpretaion. The poem does carry a feel of gloom, and you can even pick up a sense of death. I did make this poem a little abstract, but that's how I wanted the form to be. The poem has no story to it, basically just a setting and a situation combined with a message... that's why I believe it's ok to be so obscure.

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I'd call it a selection of extended palindromes, I guess - but mostly I'd just call it fantastic. Congratulations on your DD!

Precious poem, full of melancholy and mistery...really deserves the DD, congrats! (:

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Now THAT is just plain nifty! I love it! I also kinda did that in a song I wrote, 'It's Not A Lie, It's An Allegory,' but that is beyond awesome, where mine was just lame.

Awesome. ^.^

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So I start off toward somewhere new.
And I know the beauty will come shining through
All this dark rain and unfriendly snow.
Yes, there’s always a tomorrow.

I have never Faved a Featured Poem before, but ironically, for a layman, I love the structure of it!
Well earned DD sir! You did something nifty here!

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More poems should be suggested for daily deviations, especially when they are as innovative and interesting as yours.
Congrats on the DD, It was very well earned.

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interesting form, i think its a fave for originality. Overall its a tad simplistic wordwise... It still sounds great though

really strange (in a good way).
saw this on dd, and definitely deserves it.

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Awesome.
That was really neat. Loved it.